I hadn’t heard of the cinquain before I decided to write some poems for NaBloPoMo. It’s a poetry form developed by a lady named Adelaide Crapsey — I know — who was a fan of Japanese poetry forms such as haiku. You can see that influence in the cinquain, which is a five-line poem consisting of 22 syllables (two syllables in the first line, four in the second, six in the third, eight in the fourth and two in the last line).
I like a good firmly structured poem, don’t you? And so here it is, my first-ever attempt at a cinquain. I hope Ms. Crapsey would enjoy it.
This Is
Football.
Saturday night.
He’s on the couch, and I’m
online; it’s the closest we’ve been
all week.
That is one serious Crapsey poem.
At first,
it made me smile.
because football is good.
But then, it made me sad because
distance.
I love your response poem, Poet Mason.
I actually REALLY loved this, so bravo.
Love this, may try my hand at one too. 🙂
Great exercise. Nice poem. I liked the subject matter!